I like the colour scheme and uses of fonts and your layouts are clear.
We need to see more than one artist represented in images. Your cover lines should be for features rather than regulars (not quizzes or 'your say') and no page numbers on a front page. Front page needs a date line. Pages numbers on contents and DPS I'm not sure the DPS being all in CAPS works, and we need a brief 'outro'
I like the simple layout and the light colour scheme as well as the professional look of the photographs however the masthead could be a little bigger and the cover lines should be bolded out or have some more contrast against the background to make it clearer like your DPS and contents page.
I like the colour scheme and uses of fonts and your layouts are clear.
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Your cover lines should be for features rather than regulars (not quizzes or 'your say') and no page numbers on a front page.
Front page needs a date line.
Pages numbers on contents and DPS
I'm not sure the DPS being all in CAPS works, and we need a brief 'outro'
Rob
I like the simple layout and the light colour scheme as well as the professional look of the photographs however the masthead could be a little bigger and the cover lines should be bolded out or have some more contrast against the background to make it clearer like your DPS and contents page.
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